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Hit Hot CapsuleHit Hot Capsule by Herbal Maza Classical Unani Formula for Stamina, Ejaculatory Control, Reproductive Vitality & Male Performance Hit Hot Capsule is a premium classical Unani herbal supplement formulated by Dr. Yunus Malik, one of India's most trusted names in Unani and traditional male wellness medicine. Combining 14 carefully measured ingredients including Asgand (Withania somnifera), Salab Misri, Talmakhana, Singhara Khushk, Salajeet Musaffa

Hit Hot Capsule™ by Herbal Maza – Classical Unani Formula for Stamina, Ejaculatory Control, Reproductive Vitality & Male Performance

Hit Hot Capsule™ is a premium classical Unani herbal supplement formulated by Dr. Yunus Malik, one of India's most trusted names in Unani and traditional male wellness medicine. Combining 14 carefully measured ingredients — including Asgand (Withania somnifera), Salab Misri, Talmakhana, Singhara Khushk, Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit), and Kushta-e-Musallas (a purified Zinc Calx) — into a single 500mg daily capsule, this formula draws on deep classical Unani Rasa Shastra and Vajikaran tradition to address the root causes of male performance decline: weak nerve control over ejaculation, poor reproductive vitality, chronic physical fatigue, and diminished stamina.

Hit Hot Capsule™ targets these concerns at their physiological root — combining nerve-strengthening classical botanicals, reproductive tonic herbs, and purified mineral preparations (Kushta and Salajeet) rather than relying on synthetic stimulants. The result is a natural, sustainable restoration of stamina, ejaculatory control, and masculine vitality — formulated with 15+ years of Dr. Yunus Malik's expertise in classical Unani male wellness medicine.


Hit Hot Capsule™ — Physician Consultation Required for Diabetic Men: This capsule is a sugar-free herbal and mineral formula with no added sugars or high-glycaemic ingredients, generally considered well-suited for diabetic men. However, Asgand (Ashwagandha) and Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit) may have a mild influence on blood sugar and insulin sensitivity in some individuals. Diabetic men should consult their physician before starting and monitor blood glucose levels during the first four weeks of use. Do not self-adjust existing diabetes medications without medical advice.

For Hypertensive Men: Hit Hot Capsule™ does not contain stimulants or vasoconstrictors. Men managing high blood pressure should inform their physician before beginning this or any new herbal supplement, as some adaptogenic herbs may have mild cardiovascular effects in sensitive individuals.


What Is Hit Hot Capsule™?

Hit Hot Capsule™ is an oral herbal and mineral supplement in capsule form, containing 14 precisely measured classical Unani ingredients within each 500mg capsule. Twelve botanical ingredients — seeds, roots, fruits, gums, and resin — are each present at 40mg, while two purified mineral preparations, Kushta-e-Musallas (Zinc Calx) and Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit), are each present at 10mg. This combination reflects classical Unani Ilaj-bil-Tadbeer and Rasa Shastra formulation principles, where botanical nervine tonics are paired with purified mineral Kushtas for deeper, sustained systemic action.

The formula is completely free from added sugars, synthetic hormones, artificial fillers, and pharmaceutical stimulants. It is designed for safe daily long-term use — building its benefits cumulatively for deep, lasting improvement. Formulated under the expert guidance of Dr. Yunus Malik, Hit Hot Capsule™ is manufactured under quality-controlled standards with lab-tested potency and purity.


Which Problems Does Hit Hot Capsule™ Help With?

  • Premature Ejaculation & Poor Ejaculatory Control: Singhara Khushk, Behman Surkh, Talmakhana, and Beejband are classical Unani nervine tonics traditionally used to strengthen the nerve pathways governing ejaculatory timing.
  • Weak Reproductive Vitality: Salab Misri and Inderjao Shireen carry classical Unani indications for nourishing and strengthening male reproductive organ function.
  • Low Stamina & Physical Fatigue: Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit) and Kushta-e-Musallas (Zinc Calx) provide deep mineral and cellular energy support, classically used to combat fatigue at its physiological root.
  • Digestive Weakness Affecting Vitality: Ajwain supports digestive function, ensuring the broader nutrient and mineral matrix of the formula is properly absorbed and utilised by the body.
  • General Nervous Exhaustion: Asgand (Ashwagandha) is one of Ayurveda's most studied adaptogens, reducing cortisol-driven nervous exhaustion that undermines stamina and performance.
  • Internal Heat & Cooling Imbalance: Tabasheer (Bamboo resin) and Sapistan are classical Unani cooling agents traditionally included in formulations to balance the warming, stimulating action of other ingredients.
  • Reproductive Organ Weakness: Mocharas and Kikar (Acacia Gum) are classical Unani reproductive tonic gums traditionally used to nourish and strengthen the male reproductive system.
  • Mineral Deficiency-Related Weakness: Kushta-e-Musallas delivers purified Zinc in classical Kushta form — a mineral essential for testosterone synthesis and overall male vitality.
  • Age-Related Vitality Decline: The comprehensive 14-ingredient matrix is designed as a broad-spectrum Unani tonic for men experiencing the progressive decline in stamina, reproductive vitality, and nerve strength associated with age and lifestyle factors.
  • General Reproductive Health Weakness: The combination of nervine, reproductive tonic, and mineral ingredients addresses overall male reproductive organ health comprehensively.

Key Ingredients & Their Benefits

Each 500mg capsule of Hit Hot Capsule™ contains the following 14 ingredients:

Talmakhana (Asteracantha longifolia) — Seed — 40mg

A classical Unani and Ayurvedic seed traditionally used as a male reproductive tonic and nervine strengthener. Talmakhana is included in Vajikaran formulations for its contribution to reproductive vitality and physical stamina.

Asgand (Withania somnifera) — Root — 40mg

One of Ayurveda's most powerful and extensively researched adaptogens. Asgand's bioactive withanolides reduce cortisol — the primary stress hormone that suppresses testosterone — while simultaneously supporting natural androgen production. Clinical research has linked Ashwagandha supplementation to improved physical endurance, stress resilience, and reproductive health markers.

Inderjao Shireen (Wrightia tinctoria) — Seed — 40mg

A classical Unani seed with traditional use in male reproductive tonic formulations. Inderjao Shireen contributes to the formula's overall support for reproductive organ nourishment and general vitality.

Sapistan (Cordia dichotoma) — Fruit — 40mg

A classical Unani fruit traditionally valued for its cooling and soothing properties, included in formulations to balance the warming action of more stimulating ingredients while contributing its own nutritive value.

Behman Surkh (Salvia haematodes) — Root — 40mg

A classical Unani root used traditionally as a nervine tonic and male vitality-supporting botanical, included in Vajikaran formulations specifically for its contribution to nervous system strength relevant to stamina and ejaculatory control.

Beejband (Rumex maritimus) — Seed — 40mg

A classical Unani seed traditionally included in male reproductive formulations for its contribution to reproductive organ tonification and overall formula balance.

Singhara Khushk (Trapa bispinosa) — Fruit Pulp — 40mg

Dried water chestnut pulp, a classical Unani nerve-strengthening ingredient used for centuries specifically for ejaculatory control. Singhara Khushk strengthens the nervous system fibres involved in ejaculation regulation, directly relevant to improving timing and control.

Salab Misri (Orchis latifolia) — Tuberous Root — 40mg

A traditional Unani aphrodisiac and male reproductive tonic root. Salab Misri is classically used to restore reproductive vitality, support semen quality, and strengthen overall male reproductive function.

Ajwain (Trachyspermum ammi) — Fruit — 40mg

Ajwain's primary active compound thymol stimulates digestive secretions, ensuring the formula's broader nutrient and mineral matrix is properly digested and absorbed — supporting the overall efficacy of the capsule.

Tabasheer (Bambusa bambos) — Resin — 40mg

A classical Unani bamboo resin (also known as bamboo manna) traditionally valued for its cooling properties and use in formulations supporting overall physical strength and vitality.

Mocharas (Salmalia malabarica) — Gum — 40mg

A classical Ayurvedic and Unani gum resin traditionally used as a Vajikaran (vitality and reproductive tonic) ingredient and physical strength-supporting Rasayana, contributing to the formula's support for endurance and reproductive health.

Kikar (Acacia nilotica) — Gum — 40mg

A classical Unani reproductive tonic gum traditionally used to support blood circulation to the reproductive organs and nourish overall reproductive system health.

Kushta-e-Musallas (Zinc) — Calx — 10mg

A classical Unani purified mineral preparation (Kushta) of Zinc, prepared through traditional calcination processes that render the mineral bioavailable and therapeutically active. Zinc is the single most critical mineral co-factor for testosterone synthesis, sperm production, and male reproductive organ health — and its inclusion in purified Kushta form reflects classical Unani Rasa Shastra formulation expertise.

Salajeet Musaffa (Asphaltum punjabianum — Purified Shilajit) — Crystal — 10mg

Purified Shilajit, classically known as the "Destroyer of Weakness." Salajeet Musaffa's fulvic acid complex supports cellular ATP production, enhancing physical energy and endurance at the mitochondrial level. Its trace mineral content and classical Rasayana properties make it a foundational ingredient for restoring deep systemic vitality and combating chronic fatigue.


How Does Hit Hot Capsule™ Work?

  • Nerve Strengthening for Ejaculatory Control: Singhara Khushk, Behman Surkh, Talmakhana, and Beejband work together as classical Unani nervine tonics, strengthening the nerve pathways responsible for ejaculation regulation and supporting improved timing control over consistent use.
  • Reproductive Organ Tonification: Salab Misri, Inderjao Shireen, Mocharas, and Kikar collectively nourish and strengthen male reproductive organ function through classical Vajikaran mechanisms.
  • Mineral-Level Cellular Energy Support: Kushta-e-Musallas (Zinc Calx) and Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit) provide deep mineral and cellular energy support — Zinc as a testosterone synthesis cofactor, and Shilajit's fulvic acid enhancing mitochondrial ATP production.
  • Stress Adaptation: Asgand reduces cortisol-driven nervous exhaustion, supporting the hormonal environment in which the formula's other mechanisms can work effectively.
  • Digestive Support for Absorption: Ajwain ensures the broader 14-ingredient matrix is properly digested and absorbed, maximising the formula's overall bioavailability.
  • Balanced Formulation Action: Sapistan and Tabasheer's classical cooling properties balance the warming, stimulating action of the formula's nervine and reproductive tonic ingredients — reflecting careful classical Unani temperament-based formulation.

Who Should Use Hit Hot Capsule™?

  • Men experiencing premature ejaculation or poor ejaculatory timing linked to nervous system weakness
  • Men with general reproductive vitality decline or weak reproductive organ function
  • Men with low stamina and physical fatigue affecting intimate and daily performance
  • Men experiencing stress-related nervous exhaustion undermining performance and confidence
  • Men aged 30 and above experiencing age-related vitality and stamina decline
  • Men who want a classical Unani capsule combining botanical and purified mineral (Kushta) ingredients
  • Men who want a sugar-free, herbal and mineral-based supplement for daily long-term stamina support
  • Diabetic men — with physician consultation and blood glucose monitoring during initial use

Who Should Avoid Hit Hot Capsule™?

  • Men under 18 years of age
  • Women — this product is formulated exclusively for adult men, including not being suitable for pregnant or breastfeeding women
  • Men with known allergies to any of the listed herbal or mineral ingredients
  • Men with serious chronic conditions (heart disease, kidney disease, liver disease) — consult a physician before use, particularly given the purified mineral (Kushta) content
  • Men currently on hormone therapy or prescription testosterone replacement — seek medical advice before combining with herbal testosterone-supporting herbs
  • Diabetic men on insulin or oral hypoglycaemic medications — physician consultation is mandatory before starting, as Asgand and Salajeet Musaffa may mildly affect blood glucose regulation

Key Benefits of Hit Hot Capsule™

  • Supports improved ejaculatory control through classical nervine tonic herbs (Singhara Khushk, Behman Surkh, Talmakhana, Beejband)
  • Strengthens reproductive organ vitality through Salab Misri, Inderjao Shireen, Mocharas, and Kikar
  • Provides deep mineral and cellular energy support through purified Zinc (Kushta-e-Musallas) and purified Shilajit (Salajeet Musaffa)
  • Reduces stress-driven nervous exhaustion through Asgand's adaptogenic action
  • Supports digestive absorption of the full 14-ingredient matrix through Ajwain
  • Combats chronic physical fatigue and supports sustained stamina
  • Sugar-free formula — suitable for daily long-term use, including for most diabetic men with physician guidance
  • 100% classical Unani herbal and mineral formula — no synthetic hormones, no steroids, no harmful chemicals

What Makes Hit Hot Capsule™ Different?

  • Classical Unani Botanical + Mineral Kushta Integration: The combination of 12 botanical ingredients with 2 purified mineral Kushtas (Zinc and Shilajit) reflects classical Rasa Shastra formulation depth rarely found in modern herbal capsules.
  • 14-Ingredient Comprehensive Formula: Rather than relying on a small number of headline herbs, Hit Hot Capsule™ builds its support on a broad matrix of nervine roots, reproductive tonic gums and roots, digestive aids, and purified minerals.
  • Purified Mineral Kushtas: Kushta-e-Musallas (Zinc) and Salajeet Musaffa (purified Shilajit) reflect specialised classical Unani mineral preparation knowledge — a formulation depth distinguishing this capsule from standard herbal-only testosterone supplements.
  • Formulated by Dr. Yunus Malik: 15+ years of expertise in classical Unani and herbal male wellness medicine inform the precise 40mg and 10mg measures of this 14-component formula.
  • Sugar-Free: Suitable for daily long-term use and appropriate for most men, including those with physician-guided diabetes management.
  • Discreet Packaging: All orders dispatched in completely plain, unmarked packaging with no product or brand details visible on the outside.
  • Pairs Well With: Suitable as a standalone daily supplement or combined with Hit Hot Men's Oil™ for a complete internal and external performance protocol.

How to Use Hit Hot Capsule™

  • Daily Maintenance Dose: Take 1 capsule daily with water or milk, preferably after a meal.
  • Recommended Course Duration: For lasting, measurable results, use consistently for a minimum of 2 to 3 months.
  • For Diabetic Men: Monitor blood glucose levels during the first four weeks of use and inform your physician before starting. Continue prescribed diabetes medications as directed.
  • Consistency: Daily use without skipping doses is essential — the classical herbs and mineral Kushtas in this formula build their benefit progressively over weeks of consistent use.
  • Storage: Store in a cool, dry place away from direct sunlight and moisture. Keep out of reach of children.

Expected Results Timeline

  • Weeks 1–2: Improved physical energy and reduced fatigue as Asgand's adaptogenic action and the mineral Kushtas' cellular energy support begin to take effect.
  • Weeks 3–4: Noticeably improved ejaculatory control and stamina during intimacy, as the nervine tonic herbs (Singhara Khushk, Behman Surkh, Talmakhana, Beejband) accumulate their nerve-strengthening effect.
  • Months 2–3: Comprehensive improvement in reproductive vitality, stamina, and overall masculine confidence — the stage at which the formula's classical Unani botanical and mineral synergy produces its most complete and lasting results.

Safety & Quality Assurance

  • Formulated by Dr. Yunus Malik: 15+ years of expertise in classical Unani and herbal male wellness medicine — every ingredient and its precise 40mg or 10mg measure reflects deliberate classical formulation knowledge.
  • 14 Precisely Measured Ingredients: Each 500mg capsule delivers 12 botanical ingredients at 40mg each, plus 2 purified mineral Kushtas (Zinc and Shilajit) at 10mg each, alongside a minimal sodium benzoate preservative.
  • Classical Kushta Preparation Standards: Kushta-e-Musallas and Salajeet Musaffa are prepared according to classical Unani Rasa Shastra purification and calcination standards to ensure safety and bioavailability.
  • Sugar-Free Formula: No added sugars — suitable for daily long-term use.
  • No Synthetic Hormones or Steroids: All action is through classical Unani botanical and mineral mechanisms — no synthetic testosterone, no anabolic agents.
  • Manufactured Under Quality-Controlled Standards: Each batch tested for consistent potency and the absence of harmful contaminants.
  • Discreet Packaging & Worldwide Shipping: All orders dispatched in completely plain, unmarked packaging — fast, secure, and fully private delivery.

Disclaimer

Hit Hot Capsule™ is a herbal and mineral dietary supplement and is not intended to diagnose, treat, cure, or prevent any medical condition. The information provided on this page is for educational purposes only and does not constitute medical advice. Results may vary between individuals depending on age, health status, lifestyle, and consistency of use. This product contains classical Unani purified mineral preparations (Kushta-e-Musallas and Salajeet Musaffa) prepared according to traditional Rasa Shastra purification standards. Men with pre-existing medical conditions — including diabetes, hypertension, liver disease, or kidney disease — those taking prescription medications, or those being treated for hormonal disorders should consult a qualified physician before beginning use. Diabetic men should monitor blood glucose levels during initial use and inform their physician before starting. This product is not intended for use by women. This product is not a substitute for professional medical treatment. Keep out of reach of children. Store in a cool, dry place away from direct sunlight and moisture.

To order Hit Hot Capsule™ or to speak directly with Dr. Yunus Malik about the right Herbal Maza product combination for your needs, contact us on WhatsApp at +91 87550 78856 or visit www.herbalmaza.com. Your strength, confidence, and privacy are our commitment.

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High on Tropes and Satisfaction
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This is a great Romantasy book full of action, adventure, and everything you look for in this genre. I won’t lie: it does kinda feel like the author found every common trope from every successful book of this kind and threw them all into this novel. But if it ain’t broke, don’t fix it. Especially in romance, there’s a large audience who has specific expectations, and they want them every time. Nothing wrong with that and many times I’m one of them. I have no idea what defines a spoiler honestly, so spoiler alert!!!!!!! Tropes include: Only one bed at the inn/bar Dissatisfaction with life before hunk appears Lost royalty The chosen one Montage of dress up time followed by shocked hunk Forbidden romance between two from rival peoples Power that cannot be controlled, simply guided/asked Gathering intel at the inn/bar FMC who knows how to fight/use weapons well There’s probably more but no need to list them all. Good story and I would recommend!
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New York, US
★★★★★ 5
AMAZING debut novel!!!
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Plot ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Spice 🌶️🌶️.5 Romance 💘💘💘 Vibes ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️ Dual 1st person POV - Ara (26) & Rogue (39 - but looks mid-20s: they can live hundreds of years so this isn't that large of a gap as it could've been which I heavily appreciate lol) Tropes: enemies to lovers, fae/human wars (deep hatred for each other), shifters (dragons- MMC can only partial shift with wings), one horse, one bed, touch her and d!e, found family, abduction turned to freedom The Last Storm is the debut novel from JD Linton and let me tell you, you guys NEED to read this. The plot was engaging and the editing was was amazing (especially for a debut novel). Our FMC, Ara, is stuck in her gilded cage longing for a life outside of her small town. She uses her books to escape and live vicariously through the pages (honestly, relatable). After her father announces her betrothal to her childhood friend (to whom she has no romantic feelings for), Ara tumbles unknowingly into a desperate plot trying to stop the humans from slaughtering the Fae. As one can expect from an enemies to lovers / kidnapper/captive romance, Ara fights her attraction and lust towards our MMC, Rogue (the King of the Fae), for as long as she can. Upon seeing Ara for the first time, Rogue is instantly aware that she is his fated mate (not a spoiler). Since she is the General's only daughter, he plans to abduct her and use her as leverage to stop the brutality. During Ara's time in Rogue's captivity, their banter and chemistry continue to rise until they finally boil over and come together (quite literally, and many times I may add 😉). Here's what I LOVED: - Rogue continuously seeks advice from his elders and deeply respects their opinions and life experience and tries to implement their recommendations - Rogue makes many mistakes in the beginning but we see him actively work on not repeating them as the book progresses. The level of self-awareness and his ability to change his behavior was impressive - The magic system is intricate and we have only scraped the surface. As the series continues and Ara progresses in her powers, I'm sure we'll get to see more of this. I absolutely LOVE the messaging system that is used in this book. - Ara's struggles are so human and so raw. She is experiencing so much guilt and pain and hurt and getting to see her work through each of these emotions is inspiring. Especially as her and Rogue get closer and she learns she can lean on him as well, that she is not alone. - While this is the start of a series, there is NO cliffhanger! There's a bit of a teaser of something major that is going to happen at the start of the next book, but it's not a cliffhanger in the sense that we aren't sure if someone is going to live or d!e or if they'll be separated. For that, I am very thankful! This book was so much fun that I will definitely be returning to book 2, even if it takes several months (or longer since this is an debut author) to publish! - Lastly, the cover is GORGEOUS! And I love the title! I'll copy a few of my favorite quotes below so you can have a little taste of the author's writing and the world she's cultivated. 😊 Top Highlights from The Last Storm On days like this, when my heart was heavy and my mind clouded, I resorted to books— to escape, to forget, to find freedom where I had none. If I were to marry him, my face would always be turned to the window, searching for more, and if not that, I would be a shell of the person I am now. I stepped back to admire her, thr0bbing at the sight. She was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. To ever exist. Nothing, no one, had ever deserved to be worshiped more. All men should be made to kneel before her. But she would have to settle for me. The taste of her met my t0ngue as my scent merged with hers, forever branding her. Mine. I l!cked the wound. Hers. Completely and utterly hers. I didn’t claim her in ownership. I claimed her as my one. Devoted myself to one. With that mark, my body and soul were bound to her. I would never be with anyone else, emotionally or physically. It would be her or no one, until my last breath. “Scream my name. Let everyone know who I belong to.” I had never really cared about the weather before, but now, clear skies meant everything to me, and I was grateful to see another calm morning. “There will never be another woman for me.” He paused. “Ever.” I stilled at his words. “What… Why?” “This”— his thumb slid down across the mark—“ is a symbol of… surrender. I know you believe that it was my claim upon you, but it wasn’t. It never was. I bound my body and soul to you, little storm.” “I also know that it is more than this tiny, insignificant mark on your skin that binds me to you. It’s you. All of you. Your strength and resilience. Your determination to endure no matter what fate throws at you. Your love for love and stories and hope. You are entirely the opposite of everything that I am and I would gladly wear your shackles if it meant I could have you.” My mate. Mine. And then everything shifted and I understood. I understood everything. The surrender. The deep, soul-craving longing. Bound. I was bound to him. Body and soul. Entirely his. “I would’ve waited forever,” he whispered back, understanding. Seriously, everyone.. add this to your TBR!!
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Ashlee
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★★★★★ 4
A Decent Fae Romance
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** 3.5 Stars rounded up to 4 ** First off I want to say that I found the author, J. D. Linton, on TikTok right before the release of the sequel. I bought the first 2 books to support her release, so congrats to her for the release of the sequel! Overall, I liked the story & plot, I liked the characters, and I liked the spice. The downfalls: not enough development between the characters for the romance, and it leaned a little heavy into the tropes. A lot of stuff is told to you, which could have been used as devices to drive the plot and emotions of the characters. 🛑🛑 Mild Spoilers ahead, I tried to hide the obvious ones 🛑🛑 This is very obviously a fated mates, which is a trope I usually really enjoy. But I wish the relationship between Ara & Rogue had much more development before it's realized that they're mates, instead of Rogue knowing almost immediately and using it for nefarious purposes (at least in the beginning before they get to know each other). By revealing this within the first quarter of the book, I feel like it leaves less room for them to fall for each other organically (albeit with help from the mating bond) and they love each other because of the mating bond. I was disappointed as soon as Rogue know (literally only 5% in) and I literally made a note: "As much as II love a good mating trope, I wish we had to work for it a little more. Where's the fun in just telling us?" I believe that by holding out and feeding the reader snippets of a potential bond, it would've been more rewarding as a reader. I also wish there was more world building - we are told of a war between human & fae but don't get to really experience any of it. Ara is sheltered in her human home, then sheltered in Rogue's castle. There's bits and pieces about what the war has done on either side - but we're more told of the aftermath and don't really experience any of it. Ara's father is supposed to be the king's #1 general - yet he is at home with his family & with Ara for the first couple chapters. Her, her family, nor her village seem to be affected by the 10 year war going on on their borders. I wish there was a little more setup to make this conflict - an actual war - feel more than a skirmish between fighting territories. Linton could also be a little repetitive - with the biggest culprit being when Ara is upset she "brings [her] knees to [her] chest]" and either sits like that or cries. Every time she is upset this phrase is mentioned. I would get it if this was her crutch, or how she copes with grief and stress, but that should be explained why she does it so often or it becomes repetitive. I started to get annoyed with how often she would sit like this solely because it happens every couple chapters. However, I did really like the spice. I love an enemies to lovers trope, especially when it results in spicy scenes. The spicy scenes weren't anything new, but they were fun. Wish there were more but that could also just be me - there is no such thing as too much spice 😂 Would I read again? Probably not, I'm super picky with rereads. Although I did genuinely enjoy my first read through! Will I continue the series? Probably, at least for the sequel. As for #3, kind of depends on where I am with my TBR once that is released All in all an enjoyable, fast paced read
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Ashton Taylor
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★★★★★ 3
I love indie authors
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Let me preface this by saying—writing a book is HARD! Coming up with characters so real that they take on a life of their own, building an entire world, the political/magic system. Designing all of this is no easy feat. That being said. This book had so. Much. Potential. I was so excited to read this book, and I plan to finish it for the sake of finishing it. But. At this point, I would have set I’d aside as a DNF. The book could have benefited from some form of a developmental editor, or an in depth beta reader. I will say this. Within 5 chapters, there are so many… phrases that I’ve highlight that I’ve latched onto. Phrases about books and storms that were written BEAUTIFULLY! So, bravo Linton for hitting the nail on the head as to why readers disappear like they do! However, 5 chapters in and I can already guess where a majority of the story is going. But that’s also because I read like a mad-woman and have read this particular type of story, many different ways. Enemies to lovers where the FMC isn’t who she thinks she is. I am all about supporting indie authors. BUT. I also feel like criticism should be constructive, and not degrading. So if I could give this book a 4 1/2, strictly because I know the work the author put into this, I would. So if you’re looking for an easy read with characters that aren’t hard to follow, look no further! They are easy to love and easy to care for. One of the biggest issues they lacked, to me, was depth and plausible reactions to their situations. JD, you have done BEAUTIFULLY writing this book. I applaud and will continue to buy your books in the future. My BIGGEST recommendation is to definitely hire some form of an editor for any upcoming books. Or in turn, I will be happy to beta read for you. Should my opinion change of the book by the time I finish, I will happily get on here and say I was wrong, delete this review and post a different one. Until then…
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Hannah Durham
Grantham, US
★★★★★ 5
this book set my soul ablaze! <3
Format: Paperback, Format: Paperback
"i had never really cared about the weather before, but now, clear skies meant everything to me, and i was grateful to see another calm morning." this book. this book! i loved the last storm so much. the writing style. the descriptions. the world-building. the characters. the plot twists. the tropes. the sexual tension. the—everything. everything was magic. the last storm follows our two main characters, ara and rogue, giving us dual POV from both characters (which i loved, btw). ara, a human girl who has been locked away in her father’s estate most of her life, just wants to see the world. all she dreams of is seeing what else is out there. but when her father announces her engagement, she knows that dream will become nothing more than just that—a dream. rogue, the fae king, is tired of the attacks being rained down on his people. in hopes of finding out the human king adon’s secrets, rogue infiltrates auryna’s borders. in his last resort to gain information, he visits the local pub. to his surprise, the general’s precious only child is sitting at the bar, drink round after round of mead. now he just needs to figure out how to take her without anyone noticing. first and foremost, let’s talk about the endless list of my favorite tropes and aspects that this book had. ›› enemies to lovers ›› fated mates ›› one bed ›› the chosen one ›› elemental magic ›› actually good and shocking plot twists!!! ›› badass female lead ›› morally-grey love interest ›› fae/human war ›› force proximity ›› touch her and die ›› who did this to you? ›› captor/captive ›› praise k!nk (panting profusely) “you are entirely the opposite of everything that i am, and i would gladly wear your shackles if it meant i could have you.” it’s been a long while since i read a book i liked this much. but i just loved this book. it set my soul ablaze. thank you to the author for writing this beautiful story and for blessing me with an eARC! i loved it so much that i immediately bought the paperback upon release! every aspect of this book was just beautiful. i was blown away by the way the world was described, the way feelings were portrayed, the way the elements were used in the fae’s magic. it just—AHHH! i just absolutely adored it all. i cannot wait for the second book to release next year! also the way he calls her “little storm” sets my heart on fire. this was a fast-paced read and if you are a lover of acotar, fbaa, deal with the elf king, or any other similar books, then please stop everything you’re doing and read this book right now. you won’t regret it. thank you again, jd linton, for giving me the privilege of reading your arc and for blessing this world with the world you created. <3 "something about him pulled me in, like a moth to a flame, and it felt as if i was just waiting for the inevitable burn that came with flying too close to the fire."
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Reviewed in the United States on November 15, 2022

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