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Writing with Page Turning Tension: How to Craft a Story Your Reader Can't Put Down

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Writing with Page Turning Tension: How to Craft a Story Your Reader Can't Put DownYOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF: You are a writer who wants to tell the best story possible You are a writer who wants to push their work to the next level You are a writer who has just begun a draft You are a writer who has finished a draft You are a writer who feels that parts of their story aren't working ABOUT THE ONDEMAND WEBINAR Every reader picks up a book with the expectation of being instantly absorbed and unable to put the book down.

YOU'LL LOVE THIS ONDEMAND WEBINAR IF:

  • You are a writer who wants to tell the best story possible
  • You are a writer who wants to push their work to the next level
  • You are a writer who has just begun a draft
  • You are a writer who has finished a draft
  • You are a writer who feels that parts of their story aren't working

ABOUT THE ONDEMAND WEBINAR

Every reader picks up a book with the expectation of being instantly absorbed and unable to put the book down. When a book succeeds at this, it's full of tension. Tension in novels, stories, and even memoirs is like the connective tissue that allows muscles to attach to bones, and thus flex their might. It's the heart of conflict, the backbone of uncertainty, the hallmark of danger. It keeps readers guessing, and characters on their toes. When you've got it in place, stories leave readers breathless and wanting more. When it's missing, scenes feel inconsequential, plots drag, characters meander, and readers report they're bored.

Jordan Rosenfeld, a freelance journalist, author and editor, has published five writing guides and three novels. She's spent years taking stories apart and analyzing them to demystify the crucial inner workings of good story, so you can build them.

In this presentation Jordan Rosenfeld walks you through the key areas that need tension building, from character to plot, but it also delves deeper, to the subterranean places in a story where tension is often lacking: into the inner conflicts of a character's deepest psyche, to the breath beats between the very words you write, to the mechanics of how you reveal information to the reader.

WHAT YOU'LL LEARN:

  • The key elements of tension
  • How compelling goals create character tension
  • How to work with character flaws to create inner tension
  • How to insure you've got a tense inciting incident
  • How to tighten the tension of your plot's energetic markers
  • Ways to balance scene elements for maximum tension
  • Simple ways to create sentences that sing
  • How to build powerful images
  • Ways to work in thematic tension

INSTRUCTOR:

Jordan Rosenfeld is author of Writing the Intimate Character, Writing Deep Scenes (with Martha Alderson), A Writer's Guide to Persistence, Make a Scene: Crafting a Powerful Story One Scene at a Time, all Writer's Digest books, as well as Write Free: Attracting the Creative Life (BeijaFlor Press, with Rebecca Lawton) and the novels Women in Red (Booktrope), Forged in Grace and Night Oracle (Indivisible Ink). She is a former contributing editor to Writer's Digest magazine and her many publications include The Atlantic, Mental Floss, the New York Times, Publisher's Weekly, Salon, the San Francisco Chronicle, the Washington Post, The Writer magazine and many more.

Jordan holds an MFA in creative writing and literature from Bennington College, and has worked as an editor and writing coach for nearly 20 years through her business “Write Livelihood."

NOTE: Writer's Digest does not offer refunds for OnDemand Webinars. All sales are final. OnDemand Webinars do NOT include a critique.

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Dolores Evans
Port Orchard, US
★★★★★ 5
Epic!!!!
Format: Kindle
Absolutely addicted from the first page. The twists and turns, world building and character development all come together for the perfect Omegaverse. And let's not forget that spice because knots are life and these are spectacular. Running for book #2 because that cliffhanger was torturous.
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Reviewed in the United States on August 17, 2024
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Ashley Morgan
Whiting, US
★★★★★ 5
ABSOLUTELY A MUST for Omegaverse Girls!!!
I ABSOLUTELY LOVE Jillian West and her books!!! I’m so happy I already bought book two and now I have to buy the others for the Assurance Security series!! Not gonna lie Val kind of annoyed me at the beginning but she grew on me!! Her men are chef’s kisses!!! Holt annoys me some but I can let it slide. I already bought part two so I’m going to be reading that in between work phone calls!!!! DON’T TELL MY BOSS 😂😂😂😂
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Reviewed in the United States on September 30, 2025
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Carmen Alicea
Carnegie, US
★★★★★ 4
Baby bumps and bodyguards
Format: Kindle
Dark, emotional, and unexpectedly tender, Not Ready is an omegaverse romance that delivers found family feels, fierce protectiveness, and a very pregnant heroine who refuses to break. Vale’s on the run from a stalker, but lands in the arms of three private security alphas, cue the swoony tension, fake marriage twist, and slow-burn heat. It’s a little gritty, a little soft, and a whole lot addictive. If you love protective alphas, high stakes, and heroines with quiet strength, this one’s a must-read.
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Reviewed in the United States on December 18, 2025
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Shianne Whipple
Los Angeles, US
★★★★★ 5
Strong Omegaverse Comfort and a Attention Grabbing Plot
Format: Kindle
Jillian West never misses when it comes to Omegaverse, and Not Ready is no exception. This story was the perfect blend of cozy comfort and emotional depth while still delivering a strong plot. Vale is such a powerful heroine, she is strong, capable, and determined but I love that she still allows her pack to love and take care of her. It’s that balance of independence and vulnerability that makes her so relatable. The relationship dynamics were amazing: Bishop is steadfast and completely head over heels, Mercy is skeptical but protective in his own way, and Holt is the hesitant one whose slow fall is so satisfying to watch unfold. The romance hits that sweet spot between insta-love and cautious build, keeping me hooked the entire way through. And that ending. Oh my god, the cliffhanger! I need the next book in this duet immediately.
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NLB
Louisville, US
★★★★★ 5
Interesting
Format: Kindle
So I will say I enjoyed the story, for sure had its moments where it dragged but it was a great story. I really liked that omegas picked their alphas/make the pack. Normally the Alphas make it and the omega fits in with them which is great but I enjoyed this new version where all the power basically went to the omega. It was a nice change of pace. I can admit some of the weird bedroom stuff with her being pregnant was odd, it’s really not hard to do stuff when pregnant (I know I’ve had two and it’s normal and even encouraged at the end especially if you want the baby out). But I like the story as a whole and will read the second, I do hope the next one isn’t dragged bc it stopped being action or tense after she met her alphas and I don’t think it was brought up or properly done when they tried to do it. More sweet after she left.
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Reviewed in the United States on November 11, 2024

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